Well,
I obviously reviewed low because it's unfinished...
And you said 'something's wrong with the file and you can't get the swf. out of it to submit.' , then why don't you just go on the file and copy everything into a new flash file. That might work.
It was pretty good, but most of it was just his mouth moving and the fast part of the song playing...
I'll give you 3/5.