Flashmaster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[the Thing of Stuff....]

Cool,

This was very good for a first flash! It was kind of boring, but still pretty good. 3/5.

[happy folk]

I did not like this at all.

This was way too literal as the last guy said. You didn't need to animate every single word he said, and especially not when it sang "the dance of the dead," and you animated the guy dancing. And you should know that the song isn't called "Happy Folk", it's called "Fire Coming Out of the Monkey's Head". So, just put a little more effort into it PLEASE.

rising-flame responds:

the actual video is tottoly literal

[Throwback the Duck Ep. 0]

This was really entertaining.

The storyline was really well thought up and the animation was perfect. It was smooth and clean. Very professional. The voices were extremely clear. It felt like it was on television, it was so good! 5/5.

[Khale Vs. Fooh 'N' ceO]

Okay,

I just watched your recent animation "Story of Khale", then I watched this one, "Khale Vs. Fooh 'N' ceO" and the improvement is unbelievable. I don't want to sound like a dumb n00b, but how did you improve so much? Was it just practice, or did someone teach you?

Well, anyways, congradulations on your successful submission of "Story of Khale Trailor." 5/5. (I reviewed on this submission because there's a better chance of you reading it, since it wasn't on frontpage. :P)

[v3x - stopmotion2]

Meh..

NotanS lied, ( I don't mean to be mean or anything but) you're not even close to be as good as Knox. You have a bunch of random things happening, (which sometimes is okay if you do it right) and Knox has plots with characters speaking. You had very many different styles of stop-motion in that.

A big difference between yours and Knox's animations was that yours wasn't nearly as smooth and still like Knox's are. And your characters were very lumpy when Knox's are smooth. I don't think NotanS was talking very much about appearance anyways though...

Ok, enough of me blabbering on. I'll give you a 4 and get on with my life. Good luck in future stop motions. I like making claymations as well; I have two decent ones on NG.

[defanim's Morph]

Pretty cool.

I noticed you've had a few retards reviewing your claymations and you reply with a welcoming "You're and idiot" or "Not too bright, huh?" Haha, must be kind of annoying, huh? :P

That was a pretty cool animation. I'm assuming it was just a practice claymation since you mentioned it was early work.

Well, I'm going to go watch some more of your claymations now, see ya!

5/5

Defanim responds:

Yeah, newgrounds is littered with fanboys and the mentally challenged.
Glad you liked my films, not alot of people get the humor.
Thanks

[mypieceofheaven four]

Best claymation I've seen in a while.

I really like the style of your clay characters. And the mouths are very practical. The voices were suitable and some were funny. The animation was pretty good but could have been smoother; if the camera didn't move slightly every once in a while (say, if it was moved in between taking the pictures).
I watched the entire "My piece of heaven" series and I thought it was so well done that it should have gotten some awards! I was really surprised to see that.

Keep up the good entertainment, and just wondering - How old are you? I'm wondering that because of the voice acting.

Also I'm getting a feeling that you're really into claymation. I have two submissions -- They;re sort of early work so it's not extremely smooth, although the characters were modelled well. (Ren, Stimpy and Yoshi are the characters)

[Lazlow Radio #8]

...

That was horrible.

All you have done is crappily record something humourous and popular from a video game, then "animate" (I don't even think there was ebough movement to call it that) the talk-show host speaking the words.

I think the idea was so effortless enough that you could AT LEAST sync the poorly drawn mouth with the words.

Now, even though I just gave you a bad, yet honest review, that doesn't mean I hate you or anything. I just think this was a terrible idea that the fact that it got Daily 4th place??... That's pathetic. Any crappy newgrounds user with flash could put this on.

Bye for now,
-Flashmaster-

XwaynecoltX responds:

Thanks for the review

~X~

[Untitled Flash]

Well,

It was very well done for a first flash. Of course, since you're experimenting with it, there is a lot of flaws. I saw a little bit of exceptionally well frame by frame there, if you worked on it I'm sure it would come out a lot smoother.

Some good points were that even though the animation was too fast, the cartoon itself had a reasonable time considering the randomness. It was pretty funny, about as funny as a random cartoon can be, and somewhat entertaining enough to make people want to watch until the end.

Anyways, keep practicing frame by frame and I'm sure you'll get a few really good cartoons coming eventually. I'll give you a 5 for this. :)

[Freerun: Go-Man, Scene 1]

:)

I have always wanted to see something of this amazing, brilliant potential and I finally have. This was one of the most incredible things I have ever seen on Newgrounds.

That animation was truly television quality; Even better than most of the junk on television. Nobody can animate frame by frame any more! It's a disgrace!

This was an incredible idea and it turned out to perfection. When did you start working on this? I would like to know how long it took you.

You honestly deserve all the compliments in this review. Thank you for this amazing submission.